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my first attempt at painting... by KlonoaOfTheWind my first attempt at painting... by KlonoaOfTheWind
...that i've decided to upload here. Im not uploading the other ones because i rage quit lol

Used Smoshen's settings. I LOVE THEM. THEY MAKE PAINTING ABOUT 1000 TIMES EASIER.

So here, have a Murphy :3

How is it for my first try?
i used 1 layer for everything except the boring black background. XD
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I've never written a critique before so bare with me; however, I think this deserves it.

For starters, I'd say, for one of your first attempts at painting, it's well done. The different colors in the fur give it life, especially in the white part. Sometimes, the white part goes ignored, which makes it look a little too two dimensional. I do think the lips could stand to be more defined; while painting, it's never a bad thing to use very solid and bold lines for things that stand out, like the lips. I think if the lips were more prominent it would really bring out the expression.

The expression itself seems to be fine, although I think the eye is a bit large in comparison to the muzzle. Reducing the eye size just a bit, while making the top of the muzzle a little less curved (and I mean a very small amount) would go a long way in bringing this together.

The colors themselves are well done, as I mentioned above; the colors of the scarf contrast well with the rest of the fox.

All in all, it's a very cute piece (I'd love to see a background, I think you could handle it easily!), you did a great job on the fur, and I think with a little more practice you could make some great art!
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AshtailXMoonfrost Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Love this ;W;

Do you do art trades or requests by any chance?
(I found you by going to MimiDetNazca's page BTW) ;W;
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah i'll do an art trade, but cant right now as im grounded from my tablet ;w;
Feel free to ask when i finally post a journal that im ungrounded, whenever that is.
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Azorium Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Nice job! I'm working on a full background painting... ;w; rage quit sounds good right about now.
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just keep at it >w>
you can do it!
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symphonii Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
GAHH I WUV THIS
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THANKS!! 8D
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symphonii Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Youre welcome :)
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platonicCRUSH Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ITZ AWESOME SAUCE!!!!
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank youuu >w>
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platonicCRUSH Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nu prob. o3o
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catty2990 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks amazing! What program is that?
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sai, almost always :3
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catty2990 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome :3
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Millennium-Star Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Paint Tool SAI c:
ohlookatmeimacommentstalker
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catty2990 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)

And your not a comment stalker lol
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Zephreon Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
exellent!:D
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank! >w>
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Zephreon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
welcome!<w<
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Millennium-Star Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks pretty good for a first try
DEFINITELY better than what I can do ;w;
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jcndmxjkfhncjd mbnc j thanks >w>
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Millennium-Star Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem bro ;v;
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MidnightSunWolf Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Looks awesome! :squee:
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! :3
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Zorse-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BRO THATS AWESOME BRO
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! 8D
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Firefox444 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LUVZ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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KlonoaOfTheWind Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankssss 8D
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